Psychiatry & Behavioral Health Personal Statement Discussion

I’m stuck on a Health & Medical question and need an explanation.


Attached is the personal Statement and its needs to be rewritten based on the below format.

1st paragraph-Story

2nd paragraph -what I have learnt pulled to why you choose Psychiatry

3rd paragraph -Reg flag is my long gap and specialty change

4th paragraph -why you like our program or what are you looking from a program

5th-Conclusion mentioning what is difference than previous year/what have you achieved this year

Want to add my upbringing so that they can understand me as a person.